long is the way and hard that out of hell leads up to the light. [john milton]
March 03, 2009
venting out
i don't get it. i swear i don't get it. why all the insistence on that subject? do i need to know that crap? what's the point? fuck, what a pain in the ass.
Next friday already? Would love to check it, yes, but you have to send it to me today, else I won't have time.
Bear in mind though that my first language is not English, so I might not be the better option if you want me to check the way you wrote it. Will do my best though. E-mail address jeraynes[at]live[dot]com[dot]pt
(not writing it with dots and the at sigh due to adress farming schemes... security measures!)
No, sadly enough I can't speak or write Spanish. I can understand it if someone speaks to me slowly, or if whatever is written is quite simple (the same goes for French, but while I've studied French for a long time, I've never studied Spanish).
It does have common roots with Portuguese (Latin), and in many ways it is not that different... but it's different enough :)
Sadly enough, the closest thing to a poem I've ever written in my life sounded so ridiculous that I never dared show it to anyone... lol. I prefer stories, really :)
By the way, the other day you said I should become a writer. I told you I was a writer of sorts (or something like this). Although I have little fiction published on the Internet, you can check two (very) short stories I've published here. You can find the links on the side menu, requiem for lothorethiel and requiem for lothorethiel (II).
Right now I'm at work (lol), but will check out your story as soon as I get home, and will give you the feedback then :)
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okay so the deadline for the short story is next friday. and I would love it if you could check my story and tell me what to improve etc.
it is pretty amateurish but still.
and the theme is vampires.
so will you check it?
x
Next friday already? Would love to check it, yes, but you have to send it to me today, else I won't have time.
Bear in mind though that my first language is not English, so I might not be the better option if you want me to check the way you wrote it. Will do my best though. E-mail address jeraynes[at]live[dot]com[dot]pt
(not writing it with dots and the at sigh due to adress farming schemes... security measures!)
:)
lol ok thanks :)
oh, and by the way. would you know spanish by any chance? because I have a bit of it in there, and I'm not entirely sure if it's correct lol
x
No, sadly enough I can't speak or write Spanish. I can understand it if someone speaks to me slowly, or if whatever is written is quite simple (the same goes for French, but while I've studied French for a long time, I've never studied Spanish).
It does have common roots with Portuguese (Latin), and in many ways it is not that different... but it's different enough :)
ok, i've sent it
and jus keep one thing in mind: i don't usually write stories; i prefer poems.
x
Sadly enough, the closest thing to a poem I've ever written in my life sounded so ridiculous that I never dared show it to anyone... lol. I prefer stories, really :)
By the way, the other day you said I should become a writer. I told you I was a writer of sorts (or something like this). Although I have little fiction published on the Internet, you can check two (very) short stories I've published here. You can find the links on the side menu, requiem for lothorethiel and requiem for lothorethiel (II).
Right now I'm at work (lol), but will check out your story as soon as I get home, and will give you the feedback then :)
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